Wayno wrote:So is the goal of the submission to simply make the govt realize that 1200 people (S-A members) know quite a lot of detail about the flaws/risks/dangers in the current rail system, and want change to occur? or something else
For a fat and comprehensive paper that would be good. I'm more keen on the idea of a single page fact-sheet or brochure or whatever with easily digestible facts and figures with a pointer to the full thing. The idea is to get it out to busy, influential people who don't want to read through a big document and just want to cut to the chase. If it sparks their interest then they can get the whole document to get all the fine details.
E.g. Journalists (at least the type that work for News Ltd) are idiots - slip them a fact sheet and they can quickly bash out a sensationalist story without having to wade through a large document and get all confused with the things in it.
The single page thing would also lend itself to making the general public aware of how bad the situation is and how great it could be. There's a hell of a lot of people out there who never travel, there are many who have never been beyond their side of Adelaide even! These people have no concept of how Adelaide stacks up to other places in the world. Most know the rail system is shithouse because the 'Tiser told them so, but do they know how it compares to others? If you asked 1,000 people in the street what they know about the rail system and how it could be improved, how many of them would have an informed opinion? (Now how many would know what/who Paris Hilton did last night?

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It could be as simple as showing how Adelaide's rail system compares to Perth or Brisbane's (similarly populated cities) in terms of speed of travel and the frequency and amenity of services. Point out the bottlenecks in the system and how big the improvements would be after eliminating them. There could be a table showing current travel times from stations to the city via train, bus and car and how much quicker a proposed plan would make it. Ask the question of why you'd want to put up with the hassle and expense of driving into the city and finding a car park when you could drive to your local station and catch a fast train that departs every five or ten minutes.
It could point out the benefits to motorists of grade-separating level crossings. Stoppages in heavy traffic create a ripple of stoppage that propagates away from the original location and slows the flow of traffic for long after the original stoppage has cleared. (There's probably a video or animation of this effect on YouTube)